User:Siyuxu/COVID-19 pandemic in the United States/Weix7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Siyuxu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Siyuxu/COVID-19 pandemic in the United States
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The information in the lead section is very clear, and it is about the impact of COVID-19 on the U.S. economy. However the introduction is too broad and there is no background information about COVID-19 in the lead section, so I would suggest to briefly describe what is COVID-19.

The contents added in the draft are related to the topic and up-to-date because it talks about one of the biggest economic problems - employment rate and the data provided are from 2021. The contents are also not biased. The sources are current and can reflect in the article, but there are no in-text citation in any forms. Therefore, I would suggest to add some in-text citations using the tips we learned from Module 4 "Adding Citations".