User:Siyuxu/COVID-19 pandemic in the United States/Yuxiang Dou Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sirui Xu


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Siyuxu/COVID-19 pandemic in the United States


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the introductory section is very clear and the topic is very clear, this article is about the impact of Covid-19 on the US economy. The topic was discussed through the measures that were put in place by different families and governments in the United States. However, I think the essay does not give a certain amount of background to Covid-19. Although we are experiencing this epidemic now, I suggest that the social background could be described briefly, which would help the reader understand and would make the essay more structured and complete.

The draft about the citation is closely related to the topic of the article and the information of the data is very new and credible. The content is quoted from US law, so there is no bias. I would suggest that text citations could be added to the cited legal text and added in the reference section. This will allow the reader to better understand your article and will allow for sufficient evidence and a clear structure.