User:Sjalderson/Standardized test/Nmoore23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sjalderson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Standardized test

Evaluate the drafted changes
First paragraph is pretty repetitive, repeating the word standard and consistent multiple times.

Lead doesn't really provide overview of all the article's sections

I don't think the lead is too detailed, but perhaps too repetitive.

Article seems pretty neutral.

A few of the sources seem a bit dated, but the links all appear to work.

The article does have a section dedicated to testing for students of color and low-income communities, so that may fall under one of Wikipedia's equity gaps

The section mentioned above could use a bit more information, however, so that is the section I would suggest focusing on. That section of the article also relates well to our course material.