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In the article Hoarding (animal behavior), most of the information presented is relevant to the topic. The only distracting piece of information throughout was a tangent on the derivation of the verb to hoard in different languages. There is no imbalance in the amount of content in any of the segments in the article, however the segments are short and not completely developed. The information in the article is mostly basic, introducing the definition of hoarding, as well as describing the different types of hoarding and giving examples of the animals that display these types of behaviour. The information displayed is still in date, taken from referenced sources published over a range of years, from 1978 to 2014. The majority of references are older, and as such the sections in this article could be expanded upon, and new segments made by adding information from more recent research conducted about hoarding and the species that display these types of behaviors.

A strength of this article is the neutral tone it is written in. There are no biases towards a certain argument or viewpoint presented in the article, and no promotion of ideas or material. Only facts are presented in the article, avoiding any value statements or opinions. Since most of the information is basic introductory content there are not many topics related to the behaviour discussed that could be represented with several viewpoints, but any that are brought up are all equally represented. Another strength of the article is that there are lots of links provided that all lead to relevant Wikipedia pages on other subjects. Along with the Wikipedia links, an external link to videos of bird caching behaviour is available. There is also a sufficient number of references provided for the size of the article, all coming from peer-reviewed journals or books with well known publishers. The sources are all appropriate, supporting the claims presented and are also written in a neutral tone. While the references used in the article are strong resources, there are many facts missing citations, and even entire sections written without a single citation provided. Therefore, to go with the earlier suggestion of adding more information from recent research articles, sources to support the uncited claims already in the article should also be found and added.

The talk page was last edited in 2013, while the article was last edited in May of 2018. There has been very little discussion on the talk page except for minor edits. The article is part of WikiProject Animals and has been given a C-Class quality rating and is rated as having Mid-importance on the project's importance scale.

= Fat sand rat = "The fat sand rat (Psammomys obesus) is a terrestrial mammal from the gerbil subfamily that is mostly found in North Africa and the Middle East, ranging from Mauritania to the Arabian Peninsula. This species usually lives in sandy deserts, but may also be found in rocky terrain or saline marsh areas". '''Fat sand rats are very selective in their diet, only eating stems and leaves of plants from the Amaranthaceae, more commonly known as the Amaranth family. The fat sand rat acquired its name due to the fact that when it is fed a typical rodent diet, it quickly becomes obese and develops diabetes. '''

Activity Patterns
"The fat sand rat is diurnal, but its activity on the surface" fluctuates "depending on the ambient temperature. " '''Its period of activity is shortest in the summer, starting in the early morning and finishing an hour to several hours after. As the year progresses and the temperature becomes colder, the fat sand rat is active for a longer amount of time during the day, and the time at which daily activity is initiated is delayed. Upon emerging from their burrows, individuals spend a part of the beginning of their day sunbathing, engaging in other activities such as foraging afterwards. '''

'''Individuals with greater body masses have been found to forage for longer periods of time than those with a smaller body mass. When foraging, a fat sand rat will cut pieces away from plants and bring them back to their burrows, where they either eat the plant in the burrow or around the entrance, or store the plant for later consumption, which is called hoarding. The most common way that fat sand rats acquire water in the desert environment is by ingesting plants such as Atriplex halimus, which are high in water content and provide the rodent with preformed water when they are consumed. As a result of this strategy, fat sand rats do not need to drink free standing water. '''

Aside from foraging, the fat sand rat also spends time outside the burrow exploring. '''It is atypical in its exploratory behaviour since when it encounters a novel environment it exhibits perimeter patrolling behaviours, moving in straight lines along the border of an environment, rather than engaging in looping or home base behaviours usually displayed by rodents. Males also spend more time exploring an area than females. '''

Sociality
'''Fat sand rats are not social animals, they live in separate burrows with males occupying larger ranges of space than females. Typically, members of the same sex actively avoid interacting, but when females do encounter each other they engage in aggressive behaviours, and will attack each other. Males can interact in an aggressive manner towards each other, pushing or displaying sideways postures, but the majority of their interactions are peaceful. Members of opposite sexes usually only interact with each other for copulation. Aside from copulation, the type of interaction that results between males and females differs depending on which individual approaches the other.  When males approach females, the fat sand rats tend to interact in an agonistic manner, and display many different behaviours, some of which include sidling, displaying sideways postures, pushing, upright boxing, and attacking each other. When females initiate the interactions and approach a male, agonistic encounters also occur as with male initiated interactions, but peaceful interactions where animals will sniff, investigate, follow, and groom each other are much more common. '''

Habitat Selection
"Fat sand rats dig "burrows" with multiple entrances directly under plants they consume, primarily selecting burrowing sites based on the abundance of Amaranthaceae shrubs in the area over any other factor such as cover.  As such, their preferred type of habitat, and the distribution of fat sand rats in a particular habitat changes throughout the year in response to the different growing season of plants in the wadi beds or terraces that they inhabit. Wadi beds are typically populated with Amaranthaceae shrubs, and have dense vegetative cover, while terraces are very sparsely vegetated, leaving the habitat exposed. Distribution of the fat sand rat in a particular habitat is also influenced by the abundance of rainfall in the area, as well as the population density of the site from the previous season. During the winter, fat sand rats prefer the wadi habitat as a result of the vegetative growth during this time, but after a wet autumn more individuals will burrow in a terrace habitat, even when population density is low, as opposed to after a dry autumn when individuals only burrow in terrace habitats when the population density is high.

'''The burrowing activities of the rodents can impact their habitat, affecting the bacteria in the soil around their burrows such that nitrogen fixation and denitrification activity are decreased. The fat sand rat also disturbs vegetation cover while burrowing, further altering its environment. Mounds of active burrows have significantly less percent cover from vegetation than abandoned burrows and undisturbed land near abandoned burrows. '''

Anti-predator Behaviour
'''Fat sand rats are preyed upon by many desert species, including several kinds of avian predators, snakes, desert cats, and members of the Mustelidae family. Depending on the type of habitat they have burrowed in, they are exposed to different risks concerning predation. In response to the threat of predation they employ anti-predator vigilance behaviour when above ground, and will stop what they are doing to take an upright posture and survey the area or look intently in one direction. In addition to this posture, the rodents will thump their foot loudly and squeak before retreating into their burrow when frightened. There appears to be no reaction from other nearby individuals in response to this behaviour so there may be no benefit in terms of alerting conspecifics to predators in performing the foot thumping.'''

'''Fat sand rats in the terrace habitat spend significantly more time engaging in this vigilance behaviour when they are above ground than individuals living in the wadi beds, but the behaviour is not costly in that it does not interrupt their foraging, as both groups spend equivalent amounts of time foraging. However, there is a difference in foraging behaviour between the two groups as fat sand rats living in terraces tend to hoard their food more often than those living in wadi beds, and take less time to eat as well. The sociality of the fat sand rat may also have an impact on their antipredator behaviours, as they have been shown to spend less time foraging and feeding, and initiate vigilance behaviour more frequently when compared to a more social desert rodent. '''

Reproduction
'''The fat sand rat breeds from autumn to early spring and produces litters usually comprised of one to eight pups, with average litter sizes increasing over the course of the breeding season. When mothers start lactating, their body energy increases but towards the end of the lactation period they begin to utilize stored energy instead of increasing body energy, resulting in a decrease in body mass. The growth rate of pups is maximized when the litter is small and the mother eats plants with a higher water content. The young disperse from their mother at about 5 weeks of age. '''

'''The sexual activity of male fat sand rats is not affected by weather conditions, however there is a correlation between rainfall and the sexual activity of females, with more females being sexually active as the amount of rainfall increases. Reproductive strategies differ between the sexes, with females utilizing smaller ranges of space around their burrow with adequate food resources to provide for their young. Meanwhile, males occupy larger home ranges that overlap with multiple female ranges, creating the potential to mate with several females.  Females initiate copulation, and have stereotypical behaviours for approaching males, squealing and turning to dig in and kick sand towards the male. After this display, the female will exhibit lordosis, and the male will mount the female over a series of copulations. Often times, a female will lose interest quickly, and will threaten or act aggressively towards the male between mounts. '''

Medical significance
"Although they remain lean when fed their natural, vegetable-based diet, fat sand rats can easily become obese and acquire type 2 diabetes mellitus when they are fed a normal rodent diet of grains. Therefore, they have been used as an animal model for studies on diabetes and obesity. Sequencing of the complete nuclear DNA genome of the fat sand rat showed that the Pdx1 homeobox gene, a transcriptional activator of insulin, has undergone massive nucleotide change, likely contributing to diabetes and adaptation to low caloric intake.

Because they are diurnal, fat sand rats are also used as models for human seasonal affective disorder. "

'''Leischmania kDNA has been discovered in the rodent using molecular studies, suggesting the species can host the parasite that causes leishmaniasis in humans. '''

"These animals have been studied extensively for their remarkably efficient kidneys: they can produce very concentrated urine which enables them to eat halophyte plants and survive extreme heat and lack of water in their desert habitat. "

Note for editing
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Peer Review
Overall you have a great start on your article. In general, you should try to elaborate more about the specifics of their behaviours. Great additions to the reference list.

Some specific pointers:


 * •“Fat sand rats are very selective in their diet, only eating stems and leaves of plants from the Chenopodiaceae family”. This family has actually changed names. Click the link and look at what the new family is. Additionally, it is useful to include a common name for a family if possible.


 * •After the first introduction to the species you should choose either “fat sand rat” or “P. obesus” to refer to the species.


 * •Make sure to italicise all mentions of the scientific name


 * •Do you mean “free standing water”? “As a result of this strategy, fat sand rats do not need to drink free water.[9]”


 * •Your paragraphs might benefit from being split up to make the article easier to follow (specifically the activity pattern section).


 * •You should elaborate more on the behavioural aspect of habitat selection. While the information about the alteration of the environment is interesting it is not directly related to course content.


 * •Saying both “raptors” and “avian predators” is redundant.


 * •You should try to elaborate more on the specific vigilance behaviours that the fat sand rat displays. Adding in costs/benefits may also be beneficial.


 * •Additionally, you should elaborate more on specifics about the reproductive strategies.