User:SjolieW1/IRS Volunteer Income Tax Assistance Program/Imanqadir Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SjolieW1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SjolieW1/IRS_Volunteer_Income_Tax_Assistance_Program/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * IRS Volunteer Income Tax Assistance Program

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, your drafted changes are super relevant for the topic! In terms of organization, I think the first couple of sentences would make more sense under the description section, as it relates more to VITA's function/history rather than information about the volunteers. Other than that, the rest of the content makes sense organizationally. In terms of content, I think it would be useful to talk more about the EITC and CTC credits since they're super relevant right now and seem to be a big part of the organization's work. In terms of tone, some of what you wrote does not come across as neutral, and seems a bit too opinionated for a wikipedia article. Maybe consider changing the word choice for the following sentences:


 * 1) As of 2017,  the Tax Cuts and Jobs Act contributed to the over complication  of Tax filing.  (this seems like its kind of critiquing Trump era policies, which is totally valid generally, but doesn't seem to fit for wikipedia specifically).
 * 2) Unfortunately, for low-income tax payers the benefits of the EITC are diminished as refund loan fees cut into the cash refunded to the taxpayer. (again this sounds more like a personal opinion than an objective fact)

Other than that, the only thing that needs work is some grammatical errors and a couple of sentences that are incomplete. Overall, great job!