User:Skallasj4863/Maternal death/Ericksmd3839 Peer Review

General info
Lunaheights, Skallasj4863, Srmmicro24
 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Skallasj4863/Maternal_death?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Maternal death

Evaluate the drafted changes
Sub-Saharan African countries accounted for about two-thirds of the global maternal deaths and Southeast Asian countries accounted for approximately one-fifth. Since 2000, Southeast Asian countries  have had  a significant decrease in maternal mortality with an overall decrease in maternal mortality of almost 60%. Sub-Saharan Africa also saw an almost 40% decrease in maternal mortality between 2000 and 2017. As of 2017, the countries with the highest maternal mortality rates included South Sudan, Somalia, Central African Republic, Yemen, Syria, South Sudan, and the Democratic Republic of the Congo. The numbers for maternal mortality in these countries are likely affect by the political and civil unrest that these countries are facing.

I really like that in this part you chose that this part wasn't needed in the article. As well as that you have the information that you are replacing it with underneath the crossed out section. I think that the information listed is connected super well to the original article. The one critique that I would have is that more sources are needed throughout the article. I really like that you went through the article and got rid of different worlds that are fillers and are not needed.