User:SkateNate/Palos Verdes Peninsula Land Conservancy/Lcveletter Peer Review

General info
skatenate
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SkateNate/Palos_Verdes_Peninsula_Land_Conservancy?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Palos Verdes Peninsula Land Conservancy

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * good information
 * very descriptive yet keeps it short and simple.
 * more pictures could be used for the preserves section if possible but not needed
 * education section could use more citations