User:Skch96/Gender Roles in Childhood/Skch96 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Gender roles in childhood


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think looking at what Wikipedia thinks might be issues would be a good place to start. I think the lead is good but maybe could talk about the major sections a bit more and I think you could add more headings that relate to the lead. I think that the lead presents some information not talked about enough within the article (perhaps talk about the ages where we recognize these roles more). All the content relates to the topic. I think in the part about social media you could talk more about the effects on the children at certain ages more rather than just Disney. Some of the sources are not completely up to date which I think should be looked at to see if anything isn't necessarily correct anymore with new information happening all the time. All content is neutral and isn't bias which I think is benefit of this article because in my opinion it would be hard to be bias with this article. Everything is clear but I think some things could be more concise. Some things drag on in my opinion (especially in the media part). Links work. Perhaps add some related images.