User:Skeedoh/United States incarceration rate/Dreamer Jr. Peer Review

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The lead was not updated to the writers changes to the article. The content added to this article is relevant, the content includes ideas related to the displacement of African Americans when they are released from prison, as well as the effect drugs have on the African American community. The content does relate to underrepresented statists that relate to the mass incarceration of African Americans, The tone in this article in neutral, no bias is implemented through the article. The sources used in this article are relevant and creditable to the topic. The organization of the article is well, there is a clear flow throughout what the writer added and what was there before they came. Overall the work looks good and really well thought out.