User:Skeedoh/United States incarceration rate/Mayor1704 Peer Review

General info
Skeedoh
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Skeedoh/United States incarceration rate
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * United States incarceration rate:

Evaluate the drafted changes
To start off with, I believe this author did a great job adding to the chosen article. The lead has not been updated however, I'm sure the author will do so soon. I found that the content added to the United state incarceration rate article was very well done and provides the reader with useful statistics. The majority of sources used are up to date and the information is both reliable and verifiable. I felt that all information added to the article helped to paint a more complete picture. My only critique would be to look over the wording of the last paragraph added. It looks like it could be made more concise.