User:Sketchy Bee/Akwete cloth/Aosiernn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

AbigailLynnArts, Sketchy Bee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Akwete cloth
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The intro was really good. It gave a good start to learn more and get the reader interested in the topic. I like that it explained what would be talked about and went into detail within the different sections.

The detail about the technique was informative. It helped me as the reader to have a better understanding of the subject and helped me to in-vision how this process is brought about. Very detailed.

I like that as a part of this page there was a separate section on the motifs themselves that explained cultural context and significance. The blend of location and how motifs differ as well as the symbolism behind some of them was very well done.

The tone was neutral and the article was backed up by several sources.

The one thing I might add is more information on specifics of motifs. Things like different shapes within the cloth and what those shapes mean to different regions.

Overall a good article.