User:Skidepedia23/Bhagat Singh Thind/RyGuyVerve Peer Review

I like that you are adding on to the early life section of Bhagat Singh, I think you added a citation to the arrival in united states topic but I could be wrong btu I believe it is formatted incorrectly

I also like that you are considering why and how he married as it definitely has implications. I would love if this is expanded upon

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