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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Superwoman (sociology)
 * Article Evaluation
 * This is a stub and start-class article. The article's content is related to the topic and almost fully written from a neutral perspective. As for whether every claim is cited, there is a section titled "Post second-wave feminism" in which there are two paragraphs, but only the last sentence of the second paragraph has a citation. It is unclear whether this citation includes every claim made in both paragraphs or solely the final sentence. There is also no citation for the publications listed that relate to the "Superwoman," such as Stevie Wonder's song. The citations are mostly reliable, except for a 1976 newspaper article that comes from a local newspaper (Boca Raton News), not a national or international one. The article is very short and requires quite a bit of expansion.
 * Sources
 * Pascoe Leahy, Carla. “From the Little Wife to the Supermom? Maternographies of Feminism and                    Mothering in Australia since 1945.” Feminist Studies, vol. 45, no. 1, Feminist Studies, Inc., 2019, pp. 100–28, https://doi.org/10.15767/feministstudies.45.1.0100.
 * Sources
 * Pascoe Leahy, Carla. “From the Little Wife to the Supermom? Maternographies of Feminism and                    Mothering in Australia since 1945.” Feminist Studies, vol. 45, no. 1, Feminist Studies, Inc., 2019, pp. 100–28, https://doi.org/10.15767/feministstudies.45.1.0100.

Lucy Delap. “The Superwoman: Theories of Gender and Genius in Edwardian Britain.” The Historical Journal, vol. 47, no. 1, Cambridge University Press, 2004, pp. 101–26, http://www.jstor.org/stable/4091547.

Kates, Steven M., and Glenda Shaw-Garlock. “The Ever Entangling Web: A Study of Ideologies and Discourses in Advertising to Women.” Journal of Advertising, vol. 28, no. 2, Taylor & Francis, Ltd., 1999, pp. 33–49, http://www.jstor.org/stable/4189108.

Julie E. Press, and Eleanor Townsley. “Wives’ and Husbands’ Housework Reporting: Gender, Class, and Social Desirability.” Gender and Society, vol. 12, no. 2, Sage Publications, Inc., 1998, pp. 188–218, http://www.jstor.org/stable/190530.

Rashley, Lisa Hammond. “‘Work It out with Your Wife’: Gendered Expectations and Parenting Rhetoric Online.” NWSA Journal, vol. 17, no. 1, The Johns Hopkins University Press, 2005, pp. 58–92, http://www.jstor.org/stable/4317102.

Option 2

 * Article title: Unsafe abortion
 * Article Evaluation
 * This is a start-class article. Although this article is written largely from a neutral perspective, its main issues rely on two factors -- first, that major factual claims that reference data about abortion and human life are not cited. Second, that almost all of the data comes from one single source, albeit a reliable one -- the World Health Organization. In terms of data collection, there are barely any sources apart from WHO. This article has a lot more information than the "Superwoman" article, and therefore requires less expansion.
 * Sources
 * Okonofua, Friday. “Preventing Unsafe Abortion in Nigeria.” African Journal of Reproductive Health / La Revue Africaine de La Santé Reproductive, vol. 1, no. 1, Women’s Health and Action Research Centre (WHARC), 1997, pp. 25–36, https://doi.org/10.2307/3583272.
 * Sources
 * Okonofua, Friday. “Preventing Unsafe Abortion in Nigeria.” African Journal of Reproductive Health / La Revue Africaine de La Santé Reproductive, vol. 1, no. 1, Women’s Health and Action Research Centre (WHARC), 1997, pp. 25–36, https://doi.org/10.2307/3583272.

Henshaw, Stanley K., et al. “The Incidence of Abortion Worldwide.” International Family Planning Perspectives, vol. 25, Guttmacher Institute, 1999, pp. S30–38, https://doi.org/10.2307/2991869.

Hord, Charlotte, and Merrill Wolf. “Breaking the Cycle of Unsafe Abortion in Africa.” African Journal of Reproductive Health / La Revue Africaine de La Santé Reproductive, vol. 8, no. 1, Women’s Health and Action Research Centre (WHARC), 2004, pp. 29–36, https://doi.org/10.2307/3583302.

Paxman, John M., et al. “The Clandestine Epidemic: The Practice of Unsafe Abortion in Latin America.” Studies in Family Planning, vol. 24, no. 4, [Population Council, Wiley], 1993, pp. 205–26, https://doi.org/10.2307/2939189.

Berer, Marge. “National Laws and Unsafe Abortion: The Parameters of Change.” Reproductive Health Matters, vol. 12, no. 24, Taylor & Francis, Ltd., 2004, pp. 1–8, http://www.jstor.org/stable/3776110.

Option 3

 * Article title: Forced abortion
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is start-class. The article is written from a neutral point of view. However, there are some statements made in the article that have been marked by other Wikipedians as "too vague" and therefore need to be expanded on. The claims made in the article are heavily cited, which is good, and come from a solid range of globally recognized sources, such as The New York TImes. Still, this article does not have enough information about the global impact of forced abortion, as it only includes sections that demonstrate an effect on China, North Korea, The United Kingdom, and The United States. As you can see from the sources I include below, forced abortion is a global issue and should be treated as such in this article. It also almost entirely negates (save for a single sentence in the UK section) abortions that have been forced upon people with disabilities.
 * Sources
 * Ensor, Marisa O. “Lost Boys, Invisible Girls: Children, Gendered Violence and Wartime Displacement in South Sudan.” Gender, Violence, Refugees, edited by Susanne Buckley-Zistel and Ulrike Krause, 1st ed., vol. 37, Berghahn Books, 2019, pp. 197–218, https://doi.org/10.2307/j.ctvw04h31.14.
 * Sources
 * Ensor, Marisa O. “Lost Boys, Invisible Girls: Children, Gendered Violence and Wartime Displacement in South Sudan.” Gender, Violence, Refugees, edited by Susanne Buckley-Zistel and Ulrike Krause, 1st ed., vol. 37, Berghahn Books, 2019, pp. 197–218, https://doi.org/10.2307/j.ctvw04h31.14.

Erhardt-Ohren, Blake, and Sarah Lewinger. “Refugee and Internally Displaced Women’s Abortion Knowledge,                    Attitudes and Practices: Addressing the Lack of Research in Low- and                     Middle-Income Countries.” International Perspectives on Sexual and Reproductive Health, vol. 46, no. Supplement 1, Guttmacher Institute, 2020, pp. 77–81, https://doi.org/10.1363/46e1120.

Ong, Tricia, et al. “Multiplicity of Stigma: The Experiences, Fears and Knowledge of Young Trafficked Women in Nepal.” Sexual and Reproductive Health Matters, vol. 27, no. 3, Taylor & Francis, Ltd., 2019, pp. 32–49, https://www.jstor.org/stable/48617528.

Ruiz, Felipe Jaramillo. “The Committee on the Rights of Persons with Disabilities and Its Take on Sexuality.” Reproductive Health Matters, vol. 25, no. 50, Taylor & Francis, Ltd., 2017, pp. 92–103, http://www.jstor.org/stable/26495935.

World Health Organization. “Challenging the Denial of Legal Capacity in Mental Health.” Supported Decision-Making and Advance Planning: WHO QualityRights Specialized Training, World Health Organization, 2019, pp. 2–18, http://www.jstor.org/stable/resrep27901.13.

Option 4

 * Article title: Men in Feminism
 * Article Evaluation
 * This is a start-class article. The article, at times, is not neutral and definitely veers into a space in which the information feels irrelevant to the subject (such as going into detail about the birthplace and parents of a male who campaigned for woman's suffrage). The article has actually been flagged by Wikipedia for "synthesis of material which does not verifiably mention or relate to the main topic." Although there are many references and they mostly come from solid sources, the content for which they are cited is all over the place and lots of it should be cut.
 * Sources
 * MACKENZIE, SCOTT. “IT’S NOT ALWAYS THAT BLACK AND WHITE: UNIVERSALISM, FEMINISM, AND THE MONOCHROMATIC WORLDVIEW OF ‘POLYTECHNIQUE.’” Revue Canadienne d’Études Cinématographiques / Canadian Journal of Film Studies, vol. 22, no. 1, Film Studies Association of Canada, 2013, pp. 66–85, http://www.jstor.org/stable/24411754.
 * Sources
 * MACKENZIE, SCOTT. “IT’S NOT ALWAYS THAT BLACK AND WHITE: UNIVERSALISM, FEMINISM, AND THE MONOCHROMATIC WORLDVIEW OF ‘POLYTECHNIQUE.’” Revue Canadienne d’Études Cinématographiques / Canadian Journal of Film Studies, vol. 22, no. 1, Film Studies Association of Canada, 2013, pp. 66–85, http://www.jstor.org/stable/24411754.

Reichardt, Ulf, and Sabine Sielke. “What Does Man Want? The Recent Debates on Manhood and Masculinities.” Amerikastudien / American Studies, vol. 43, no. 4, Universitätsverlag WINTER Gmbh, 1998, pp. 563–75, http://www.jstor.org/stable/41157417.

Bucknor, Michael A. “Dangerous Crossings: Caribbean Masculinities and the Politics of Challenging Gendered Borderlines.” Journal of West Indian Literature, vol. 21, no. 1/2, Journal of West Indian Literature, 2012, pp. vii–xxx, http://www.jstor.org/stable/24615440.

Option 5

 * Article title: Women in business
 * Article Evaluation
 * This is a start-class article. The article is largely written from a non-neutral perspective; it often makes personal judgments and claims that are not based on fact, but opinion. It is also lacking proper citations throughout the article (even in the leading description). Furthermore, the lead description is not very specific about the topicality of this subject. All in all, the article as a whole needs a lot of work from its citations, sources, determination of relevance, and focus on global perspectives rather than only Western ones.
 * This is a start-class article. The article is largely written from a non-neutral perspective; it often makes personal judgments and claims that are not based on fact, but opinion. It is also lacking proper citations throughout the article (even in the leading description). Furthermore, the lead description is not very specific about the topicality of this subject. All in all, the article as a whole needs a lot of work from its citations, sources, determination of relevance, and focus on global perspectives rather than only Western ones.


 * Sources
 * Pollmann, Laura Albornoz. “Women in Business: Getting to the C-Suite.” Women’s Leadership in Latin America: THE KEY TO GROWTH AND SUSTAINABLE DEVELOPMENT, Atlantic Council, 2017, pp. 8–10, http://www.jstor.org/stable/resrep03714.8.

Wailerdsak (Yabushita), Natenapha. “Women in Business and Management in Thailand: Transforming High Participation Without EEO.” Journal of Southeast Asian Economies, vol. 37, no. 2, ISEAS - Yusof Ishak Institute, 2020, pp. 163–80, https://www.jstor.org/stable/26938871.

BISHOP, CATHERINE. “When Your Money Is Not Your Own: Coverture and Married Women In Business in Colonial New South Wales.” Law and History Review, vol. 33, no. 1, [American Society for Legal History, Inc., Board of Trustees of the University of Illinois, Cambridge University Press], 2015, pp. 181–200, http://www.jstor.org/stable/43670754.

Gay, Gale Horton. “Best Practices in Diversity: Companies Keeping Advancement of Women a Priority.” Women of Color Magazine, vol. 19, no. 1, Career Communications Group, 2019, pp. 32–36, https://www.jstor.org/stable/26652805.

Paarlberg, Michael A. “Challenges African American Women Face in the South.” AGRICULTURAL COOPERATIVES: OPPORTUNITIES AND CHALLENGES FOR AFRICAN AMERICAN WOMEN IN THE SOUTH, Institute for Policy Studies, 2018, pp. 3–7, http://www.jstor.org/stable/resrep27067.4.