User:Skinnyeleven/Zapatista Army of National Liberation/Cc66816 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Skinnyeleven


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Skinnyeleven/Zapatista_Army_of_National_Liberation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Zapatista Army of National Liberation
 * Zapatista Army of National Liberation

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed the additions that you made to this article, and feel that it really helped my understanding of your chosen topic!

One somewhat major thing that I noticed is that there is no "Lead" sentence or paragraph. I think that this could aid in your work by sort of announcing in short brief detail what will be discussed within this article!

I also noticed that within your Religion section, the first source that you cited is a little bit out of date, not sure if this is a big issue or not to use this information or if you could look into finding a newer and more up to date source!

I enjoyed all of the media that it is in the original article of what you are working on, so I would suggest keeping some of those images!

Very good job on keeping a neutral tone! I feel like you did not include any biases and only added in factual information!

Small suggestions - In your religion paragraph make sure you capitalize proper nouns and religions

All in all, I think this is a great article that you made helpful contributions to. A few small grammatical edits are needed, I suggest using a grammarly software to help point out those errors, but besides the suggestions I have laid out for you, I think it is a really good article!