User:Skirby0923/A Cross Line/FaeBee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I'm not sure if you have much more information on any of the sections, but if possible they could use some beef. But I know it's been a struggle finding info and what you have isn't bad