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article : Appalachian Stereotypes Original: "With the growth of coal mining around the 20th century, the population in the Appalachian region grew rapidly, including many different cultures. However, after the Great Depression many families migrated out of the area to find work in the cities where there were more industrial job opportunities."

Revised: "With the growth of the coal mining industry around the 20th century, the Appalachian regions population grew rapidly. However, after the Great Depression many families migrated out of the region in order to find work in cities where there were more job opportunities."

Rural diversity
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rural_diversity

Sexuality
It is estimated that fifteen to twenty percent of LGBTQ+ people in the United States live in rural areas. Rural areas also have about the same percentage of LGBTQ residents as do urban areas, though many are not open about their identity due to threat of discrimination and violence. They are more likely than their urban peers to be subject to discrimination and social exclusion. Rural LGBTQ people are often overlooked by the larger LGBTQ community and by researchers, which both tend to be centered in and around cities. This results in a lack of resources for rural LGBTQ+ populations.

Revised: About fifteen to twenty percent of LGBQT+ people in the united States live in rural and urban area. However, members of rural areas are less likely to be open about their sexuality due to the discrimination and violent threats they may face. The lack of people who openly identify as LGBQT+ leads to the lack of resources for them throughout the rural communities.