User:Skjordan2002/Abreaction/Jenila Tamang Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Skjordan2002


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Skjordan2002/Abreaction


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Abreaction

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: There is no description in the lead.

Content: The article talks more about its objective than the topic itself.

Tone and balance: I think the tone and balance are fine except in the first sentence because the word best seems inappropriate.

Sources and references: The source is reliable since it's an eBook.

Organization and writing quality: The organization and writing seem fine.

Images and media: No image has been uploaded.

Overall impression: It is short yet very instructive.