User:Skmatth

=Needs Improvement Articles= Crème brûlée Article
 * This article needs an improved Ingredients format. The bullet list not in a linear format looks strange.
 * The Technique section should be above the Crema Catalana section
 * There is a link to a page that does not exist
 * The layout of the photos could be improved; showing images of different steps of the item could be helpful as opposed to only showing the finished product

Pop Music Article
 * The content could be more expanded with the sub-genres
 * The stylistic section is dense and needs to be broken into parts
 * the callouts on the side with quotations seem random and not useful
 * a time period is missing in the stylistic evolution section

=Potential Articles to Edit= Walt Disney Classics

Electronic rock

Hawaiiloa

=Walt Disney Classics=

List of Problems

 * Needs to be copy edited
 * The table of contents looks overwhelming
 * "Prehistory" title could be changed
 * The organization of the sub-subcategories under "North American release history" can have a different format to differentiate it from the timeline sub titles
 * Some sections need a more informative title
 * Has tags at the top of page

Tasks

 * copy edit
 * edit titles
 * reformat sub-subcategories
 * reorganize table of contents

=Hawaiiloa=

List of Problems

 * article does not clarify if it covers the mythical concept of Hawaiiloa or the modern day canoe
 * article is more focused on the mythical god but uses a photo of the canoe
 * needs subcategories
 * style and tone needs to reflect encyclopedic tone

Tasks

 * copy edit
 * edit to match encyclopedic tone
 * create subcategory about the modern use of Hawaiiloa
 * add photo to match the focus of mythical god