User:Skoobie03/Nyaung-gan, Myanmar/Fe.were Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Skoobie03, Nasimfredj


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Skoobie03/Nyaung-gan%2C_Myanmar?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: There is not much to evaluate here since there isn't yet a lead, but it is clear that y'all have the right idea from the notes in that section of the article. I would also consider adding in a sentence or two indicating what makes your site notable.

Content: Since this article is still in the outline/draft stage, I cannot speak to whether or not there is any information conspicuously missing from the article. It does seem like the content added so far is relevant to the site and up-to-date. Just make sure to flesh things out and y'all will be golden!

Tone and Balance: From what I've seen, y'all are writing in a neutral and unbiased tone, which is great! Just continue to make sure that you make no opinion-based statements.

Sources and References: The references section of the article is quite small right now, but it is clear that as you add to your article, more references will be added. Y'all seem to be on the right track, though, since the sources that are currently listed in the references section are both from reputable academic journals.

Organization: The organization of the articles based on the headers/subheaders y'all have added so far seems to cover pretty much everything that would be necessary to explain the significance of this archaeological site. I would add in another section specifically to discuss what the archaeological record tells us about everyday life when the site was occupied.

Images and Media: N/A

For New Articles Only: The article clearly meets the Wikipedia notability requirements, though it is difficult for me to evaluate how exhaustive the list of sources used is, since this article is still in the early stages of development and all of the information/references have not yet been added. Y'all clearly understand how to create headings and subheadings to organize the information in the article, though I'd suggest a couple of changes (maybe include "Dates and Ages" in the "Location and Site Details" section?). I would also suggest linking to other Wikipedia articles as much as possible (for example, it's pretty easy to link to the page for the country and province that your site is located in) and adding in an info box (see the tutorial Dr. Carter posted in Canvas). These changes will help make your article more engaging and professional.

Overall Impressions: I believe y'all are staring this article from scratch, which means that y'all have definitely improved the overall quality of the article. My advice is to expand on the content as much as possible so that you have a clearer idea of how far you are from being finished.