User:Skoobie03/Nyaung-gan, Myanmar/Lilianavanzutphen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Skoobie03


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Skoobie03/Nyaung-gan%2C_Myanmar?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * does not exist

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * This article is supported by two references, and they are added throughout the article properly. The information on the site, is backed up reliable sources independent of the subject. The links also work and check out with what they actually site. The article does follow the patterns of other similar articles by having headings and subheadings, and has information filled out in most of the headings and subheadings. The organization of this page is really clear and is a good start for the rest of the article, including having notes of where they are to add more information. There could be some images added to make the page a little more "nice looking". The outline gives good indictation of the information to be presented and added. This page does not yet have links within it to make it more discoverable, although there are opportunities present to do so. Besides the fact that it can be made more complete as there are a a few of gaps of content, this sandbox is of good quality and represents the site well as a good start. The grammar is also correct which is professional. It might need some more background, but it does give a brief description of the excavated artifacts retrieved from the site. The headings and content already there gives a good precursor to what further information may be added and expanded on. The content can be improved by filling in other headings and subheadings. It would be more complete if the information presented was expanded on. Overall, this page is a great start to an organized page and presents really clear writing, making it easier to understand for those who don't have any background on the site.