User:SkyM99/Psychogenic non-epileptic seizure/Chanda10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Skym99


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:SkyM99/sandbox


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychogenic non-epileptic seizure

Evaluate the drafted changes
Sky, It looks as if you definitly know your way around this article. I did get confused about the edits with the Lines through the words. Are those things you are changing or things you are removing? The bolding and underlining of your edits were clear and put through. I see you took the time to notice the typo's and incomplete sentencing in the original article. It was clear to follow, very easy to understand. I can tell you really put your best effort into this wiki edit. Strong verbage, Directly stated, the sources were working links. This is strong work. I can not think of anything to exactly recommened you do to make it better, if anything you have made me want to go back and do a more thorough edit on my own. Kudos! Chanda