User:Skylar.basich/Psalmopoeus irminia/Sam121302 Peer Review

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Skylar Basich
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 * User:Skylar.basich/Psalmopoeus irminia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psalmopoeus irminia

Evaluate the drafted changes
These are some good contributions for this article! You did well in keeping it in professional terms and not making anything personal in these additions. The categories are well labeled and this is a good addition from the first article where there was only one section. There are a few things I would add in this. I would make sure all of your sources are listed. This way it is easy to tell how many sources there are. From first appearance, it seems like there are only two other sources, and I believe we are supposed to have three. It is also important to have those links to each source to the information so the reader knows it is backed up by a peer-reviewed article. There also seems to not be much more information added to this article. I would suggest to look a bit more and add as much information as you can about this species. Lastly, I would think about adding a lead to the overall article since it does not have one. This is a great start!