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Climate change Policy of California Possible edits


 * Is it written neutrally? The neutrality of the article is disputed, original research possibly used and written like an advertisement

Talk page suggests that the sentences themselves are written neutrally, but is "about all the proactive things that California is doing for the environment, with essentially no independent assessment of their effectiveness"

- suggestion: include more research with independent assessments rather than too many articles by the government of California being used for sources


 * Does each claim have a citation?

no, lots of place where the claims are not supported by a citation - need to fix that


 * Are the citations reliable?

ALOT of the citation are from ca.gov, which could be problematic because of course the government is going to make their own climate change policy look better and seem more effective than it actually could be. Need more independent sources like the talk page says.