User:Skylercafferata/Chinese opera/Peteryebuzhidaogaiqushenmemingzi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Skyler


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Skylercafferata/Chinese_opera?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Chinese opera

Evaluate the drafted changes
First of all I see Skyler did add one more history part about chinese opera which is about the Number of tropes in China at 1954. then he added a lot informations about face paint, it is very impressive he did find the basic information about every color face paint. Also I can see that Skyler must did a lot research about the exactly face paint because he also mentioned the lines and the pattern of it. then right after it he talked about the music and dancing relationship. So that is nearly all the new things he added in the wiki draft. for those research which really make me impressive is about he did found out what is the color represent in the face paint and he list them out. I might never did it that exactly. But since he mentioned the face paint. I would like to give some tips about it. Because I don't think I saw any information about it in the wiki article. that is for the face paint there are classification. there are actually five different types of facial make up in operas. they are “生” “旦” “净” “末” “丑” for each of them there really have a very complicate division in side of it. just use “生” as an example, it basically means male characters in Chinese Opera, but inside of it there are Xiao Sheng, Lao Sheng and Wu Sheng. they will divide it by the age, the Characteristic, and even the Matiral Arts.I will try to tell him about it and leave the choice to him. and I will try to help him with this or any other resource which might be hard to find for him.

then for all the changes in his article, It seems the resource were from several different pages. also it seems right for me. And the article is pretty neutral, so there are no unsure informations or Extreme remarks and views. So I believe it would be a great change for this wiki article and I feel good about it. But if something I would like to suggest, I think he can add more images for the face paint, because it can help him on showing people what are those face paint looks like.