User:Skylercafferata/Guzheng/Peteryebuzhidaogaiqushenmemingzi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Skyler


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Skylercafferata/Guzheng?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Guzheng

Evaluate the drafted changes
For this Guzheng part Editor seems delete some unnecessary part. I think he must spend most of his energy on the Face paint part. I was thinking maybe he changed it in the beginning but as the time I compare it with the original article there seems not much changed.