User:Skylerkv/Personal computer/DerGeister Peer Review

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I like that you adding specific companies as well as specific genres and links for them. It all seems neutral which is good especially when speaking about other consoles and does not draw any lines on which one is better or worse. One thing I was unsure about is the statement saying "Distributors such as the ones listed allow millions of games to be purchasable and accessible to users". My initial train of thought with this sentence was thinking about the total number of unique games that are available. With that mindset I tried to look at your sources to see where it said that as it seemed a little bit of a stretch but could not find anything about it. I looked into it a little and found an article updated as of 2023 stating that there is over 831,000 games across all platforms. When I hear million especially plural it makes me think at least 2 million so I feel the wording could be changed a little bit to refrain from misunderstandings. That is the only major thing that stuck out to me otherwise I feel everything is well worded and well organized. All of the information provided are things that relate to PC gaming and things that are good to know in that topic which is good.