User:Skylily19/Literacy & Colonialism/Jacob.brown00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Skylily19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Skylily19/Literacy_%26_Colonialism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think the lead is off to a good started because it makes it clear on what the page is about and it begins to mention what some of the body paragraphs will go into. I would just try and make sure the lead at least mentions all the major sections later on in the page. The references are off to a good start being in alphabetical order, but I would add more as you begin to work on the body paragraphs. This will make the body paragraphs easier to create. Also, make sure you are citing inside the page as well as you are typing. So far the tone of the article is balanced as well.