User:Sl6268/Pesticide incidents in the San Joaquin Valley/Vale.ramir04 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

S16268


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sl6268/Pesticide_incidents_in_the_San_Joaquin_Valley?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pesticide incidents in the San Joaquin Valley

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The paragraph is relevant to the topic and is all up to date. The sources all seem to be reliable and go over all the information, and all the links work. The structure is well put together and the tone is unbiased. Everything seems to be well organized and clear, and everything was broken down greatly. The paragraph improved the article with the information that being added and seems to be heading towards the right direction. The only thing that needs to be added are images, otherwise everything else is great.