User:Slaughter3/Marvin Trilogy/ScrambledLegz Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: Slaughter3


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Marvin Trilogy


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marvin Trilogy

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article so far is very well put together and orgainzed appropriately. I like that you went in and added parenthesis for clarification, the article is a great start I would consider adding in a few pictures or something to help the reader visualize what a musical even looks like as some may not know. Overall I like the use of the figures and charts that map out the timeline of the trilogy, this makes it much easier to understand how the events unfolded. Great work!