User:Slaughter3/Marvin Trilogy/WikiCar03 Peer Review

Peer Review

Lead: I think the lead is good and outlines what the rest of the page contains well

Content: The content seems well put together however I do notice a lack of references throughout the article though I do see that you added a few sources into your bibliography.

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