User:Sld99/Splitting (psychology)/Mdbutler7 Peer Review

General info
Sld99
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Sld99/Splitting (psychology) - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Splitting (psychology) - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Thanks for sharing your thoughts about why you chose to edit this article! I think the addition of new and credible resources in your draft is a great enhancement to the article. A super quick helpful critique concerning these sources would be to cite them appropriately in your draft. Using the Cite function within Wiki will also create the appropriate reference format and move them to the reference section of your draft instead of at the top. I would definitely encourage you to correctly cite the area you plan to omit from the article claiming someone else first coined the term of splitting, as that will most certainly be something other Wiki editors will be watching for. I briefly read through the articles Talk page, and it seems to be fairly controversial who first coined the term. It also appears the term splitting may be applied to multiple concepts within psychology, so I would definitely proof the article to ensure the appropriate concept is being applied for claims/areas of the article other users have mentioned on the Talk page. Other than that, I think you're off to a great start!

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