User:SleepDrifter/Privatization of the electricity sector in Cameroon/MathewLJohnson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Assigned to: Juliagonsman, SleepDrifter


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SleepDrifter/Privatization_of_the_electricity_sector_in_Cameroon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Privatization of the electricity sector in Cameroon

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article looks like a Wikipedia article. The structure makes sense. The tone is neutral. The sources are independent and reliable.

The "Background" section seemed to be the most polished. It was very good and provided a lot of information. The "Forms of privatization" section seems to be off to a good start as well.

I hope you continue to expand on the "Energy production in Cameroon and the role of electricity" section and tell us a bit more about the role of electricity in different regions of Cameroon. A few questions I would ask are:

1) Where, geographically, is electricity most privatized?

2) Are there any energy infrastructure projects currently underway or in the pipeline?

3) What does access to electricity look like across socioeconomic class?

The last sections look good as well. Overall it seems like this article is turning out well.