User:Sleepwalker1999/Prison farm/10desertcactus Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sleepwalker1999


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Sleepwalker1999/Prison farm


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prison farm

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far the draft for the article has some weird formatting and incomplete thoughts, but definitely a good start! So far the article discusses many things, but there are no sources listed or linked for the claims listed, which is necessary to make any claims, but also will help for when the draft goes onto the actual article. This is a very interesting topic and is easy to write in a biased way, so be careful about including claims without citing and/or directly discussing who is making a claim. I am excited to see the development of this article!