User:Sleepwalker1999/Prison farm/BonklesMcGinty Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sleepwalker1999


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 * Prison farm

Evaluate the drafted changes
This isn a very interesting subject, one that I think it is particularly important to keep in mind bias and perspective while writing. As far as the draft goes, I think the editor needs sources and citations for all of the points they want to include. I would also add in more specifics about the bad conditions of the working environment and living spaces. Also, maybe including the methods the armed correctional guards use to enforce the prisoners. The fact that prisoners aren't included in the fair wage act could be expanded upon, maybe given its own section! If there is proponents for and against this inclusion, you could add in the arguments of both sides. With regards to the point "if it was minimum wage it would be 7.5 million dollars worth of wage", this is a really interesting point but because it is based off of our current minimum wage I wouldn't include it in this article! Overall, I'm excited to see what you do with this article.