User:Sleepwalker1999/Prison farm/CompostTheRich Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sleepwalker1999 & User3530


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sleepwalker1999/Prison_farm?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prison farm

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

These ideas look really good so far. I don't have too much else to add, except maybe that you could also talk about how California uses prison labor for wildland firefighting. Kamala Harris even talks about not having enough firefighters, and using that to keep people in prison when she was AG for California.