User:Sleepwalker1999/Prison farm/Lovebird.butterfly.turtle Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Sleepwalker1999, User3530


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sleepwalker1999/Prison_farm?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Prison farm

Evaluate the drafted changes
Looks like y'all have a good start going and have brainstormed some ideas. The sources that you have picked out and linked look like they are good quality if you can incorporate them in your article. I think that you could make some interesting additions with regard to the legality of the 13th amendment. I think that some of the statements you wrote could use citations/sources before you go about writing them in the article. I'll be excited to see what you have when you have made some edits to the article!