User:SleepyDragon18/Sköll/Mysticcrystals.777 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

SleepyDragon18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SleepyDragon18/Sk%C3%B6ll?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sköll

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that this is a fantastic start to your article, you have added so much great information that adds so well to the stub that you started with. As for what you have so far, I honestly think everything is very well-written, and your organization makes sense to me. Finishing up your Ragnorok section, elaborating more on the study about how all three wolves are the same, and just extending your sections a bit more, are the only real critiques I have. I see that you have taken a lot of time to make this article good, great job.