User:Slicesofky/Affect (psychology)/Ajr1234 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Slicesofky)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Slicesofky/Affect_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Affect (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * It appears that there is not any information in the sandbox draft. I would suggest seeing if there are any articles that have look at different dimensions of affect. I would also suggest seeing if there are articles that talk about whether affect is the same in all age groups. If there is conflicting information make sure it is included so they readers can get both sides of the story. I suggest to look up information for sections that seem to be underdeveloped compared to the rest of the article, for example, affect display is not balanced. Also, behavior and cognition and affects are sections that could use some improvement too. I would suggest looking up systematic reviews of affect and whether they can be detected in babies or how effective the detection of affect in facial expressions. Also, make sure the information is delivered in an organized fashion and that readers will be able to understand the information. Make sure the links for the sources work so that other people can see the information in the article.