User:Slicesofky/Affect (psychology)/Jshelby9 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ky Gilbert (Slices of Ky)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Affect (psychology) - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
There has not been much updated to reflect new content in the lead in this article. I would add more information on the definition and how/where it came from. You could talk about how it came to psychology and the history.

I think there was content added to the dimensions which I felt was all sited correctly and done well.

I would add more to the affects display or completely take it out.

Overall the tone of this is neutral and didn't find any biases.