User:Slicesofky/Affect (psychology)/Thatbaddie205 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

slicesofky


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Slicesofky/Affect_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Affect (psychology)

Review of the Wikipedia article
Lead Section: The lead section of this article provides a brief and clear description of what attribution psychology is and even provides a few examples of how it relates to our environment. It was not overall detailed to me, it was a correct balance of introducing the topic and who came up with this theory.

Content: The overall content was relevant to the topic, but I felt like the article was almost repeating the same thing over and over again. I don't feel like I learned something new at the end of the article. The citations/references in the article are not very up to date either.

Tone & Balance: The article appears to have neutral claims and I did not notice and bias claims towards a particular side.

Sources & References: There were over 71 sources which are great, but majority of the sources were old dating back to the 1960s.

Overall impressions: My overall impressions of the article is that it was very informative and applied how attribution psychology can be in many forms of our thoughts, ideas, and ways of life.