User:Slolamingsnailmail/Rhinovirus/Blynnski34 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Slolamingsnailmail, Zingylynx


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Slolamingsnailmail/Rhinovirus
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rhinovirus

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the article draft is easy to read and flows. All of the citation links work. However, the first two sentences could use a citation just because they seem to be stating a fact. The writing could also be split into two paragraphs, one talking about why prevention of rhinovirus is difficult and then the second paragraph talking about why Rhinovirus needs preventative measures for the immune compromised.