User:Slolamingsnailmail/Rhinovirus/Nikkicalvert Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Slolamingsnailmail, Zingylynx


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Slolamingsnailmail/Rhinovirus - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Rhinovirus - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it contributes well to why there is no vaccine but why it could be helpful for the immunocompromised and the comparisons to influenza and covid were helpful in the understanding. It is well organized and it easy to understand. However, I think the original article piece may have already been stated that there was no vaccine as did your edit. At the end of your edit maybe use a different word than hope to keep the tone of the article more neutral.