User:Slothman32

OK this is my first user page. I'm not really sure how to write it to make it similar to other's.

In any case, should I just put suggestions on additions here? Like a thing to add to a page but since I get lazy I can do it later. Or maybe someone else will see it.

Editables:

1. Amoeba:

(comma)

class Mastigophora, phylum sarcodina protozo

(style)

until they go inside of you

(style)

They are not uncomfortable in freshwater; they are content in it

2. Miles_per_gallon:

(why different)

petrol (gasoline) in one case, gasoline (petrol in another).

3.Amadou_Diallo

(style)

Diallo's mother, Kadiatou, and his stepfather, Sankarella Diallo

Since Diallo's name mentioned is his last then when his stepfather's name is used maybe only his first should be there. It almost sounds like the victim's name is "Diallo Diallo".

4.First_they_came...

(wrong date)

... August 28, 1989, commemorating the 50th anniversary of the start of World War II

5.Plant

(opinion)

badness of plants is opinion as "bad" is subjective

(dagger footnote)

several groups have the mark but what it is not listed

6. Freedom_in_the_World

(opinion)

Freedom in the World 2007:

may legitimately place on citizens