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BLP articles edited by Shakehandsman in the last two months consisting of more than just adding/removing categories, links.


 * Amanda Marcotte - feminist blogger: adds a neutral section about her work
 * Jack Dromey: Labour politician. Adds a section on allegations of financial irregularities.
 * Kate Green Labour politician. General clean up and neutral information. Also adds a section on failing to declare an interest in parliament.
 * Deborah Orr Guardian journalist. general clean up and expands an already very large controversy section.
 * Fiona Bruce: BBC journalist- adds a section about possibly dubious financial affairs
 * Fiona Mactaggart Labour politician  adds a section about criticism Mactaggart has received.  as well as some minor neutral edits
 * Michele Elliott psychologist. Creates a new, positive article about this woman who wrote the book "Female Sexual Abuse of Children", and who has been berated by feminists.
 * Rachel Reeves Labour politician: neutral edits.
 * Nicholas Joicey Economist. spouse of above. Creation of article: neutral.
 * Neil Lyndon. journalist: adds negative information to an unready very unbalanced bio.
 * Diane Coyle and Vice Chairman of the BBC Trust. Extensive edits which are protested as inaccurate by the subject of the article at several fora..  Discussion about sourcing and other issues at BLPN  noting that Shakehandsman had contributed most of the negative material, which was subsequently  deleted with the edit summary "removed horrible "Political views" section for WP:COATRACK, WP:UNDUE issues". Subsequent edits seem neutral.
 * Marina Hyde Guardian journalist. Some neutral edits, but also new sections about her sacking and about a controversy.
 * John Pienaar BBC journalist: neutral edits.
 * Edwin Jowitt creates article about a judge. Neutral as far as it goes, but with a prominent mention of a trial where a white person was killed by Asians. Also created an article about the crown court with the case mentioned as the only notable case., so appear to be coatracks.  Multiple other coatracking edits about this and another similar race-based trial at about the same time.2006_in_ScotlandRoderick Macdonald, Lord UistFlowers and_Football Tops, Race and crime in the United_Kingdom, Bellahouston Academy, Pollokshields, 2006 in the United_Kingdom, Edinburgh (HM Prison), Parker (surname), Major_crimes_in_the_United_Kingdom, September_11_attacks, Donald_(surname), Peterborough, Criticism_of_the_BBC, 2005_in_Pakistan, Millfield,_Peterborough.
 * Vanni Treves adds that he is a Labour donor.
 * Robin van Persie footballer:Rewrite of a false allegation of rape section. Generally neutral: initially named the woman, but without a reference. Later provided one
 * Cherie Blair wife of former Labour PM. Neutral.
 * Laurie Penny. Guardian columnist. Adds controversial information sourced a website (order-order.com) that has been determined in the past not to be a reliable source for BLP matters,  and a newspaper blog citing that website.
 * Mark Thompson BBC Director General. Picks part of a quote by the subject  Source says:"in much of current affairs, in terms of people's personal politics, which were quite vocal, a massive bias to the left.". Shakehandsman selective quotes this as "a massive bias to the Left" implying Thompson said this about the BBC as a whole, rather than in the personal politics of the journalists in the news department.]