User:Smalls2023/Developmental psychology/Kbaird17 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Smalls2023


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Smalls2023/Developmental psychology - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Developmental psychology - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
A charming article on one of my favorite psychology topics, however I feel that it is lacking some sections. Here are my ideas.


 * In your article body I would expound on the social and emotional part of developmental psychology on child and how it affects their adolescent years.
 * I would also choose age group to talk more on for example Childhood years how developmental those years are critical for a child and how different type of parenting can affect the child development.
 * Your source is a bit outdate but there are newer sources such as: Adolescence: What do Transmission, Transition, and Translation have to do with it? - PMC (nih.gov)

You have a decent beginning. I would propose you finding a segments or two that you feel open to explaining on.