User:Smarshall01!/Choke Canyon Reservoir/ChanceCobb Peer Review

Peer review
I am peer reviewing Smarshall01? Choke Canyon Reservior page

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)? I am peer reviewing Smarshall01? Choke Canyon Reservior page
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Smarshall01!/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?

Content
Guiding questions:


 * the information is very 1 dimensional . there needs to be more depth to what you have provided.
 * there is information still needed like the history of the lake; how it got its name? what is the purpose of the lake/ who is it supplying water too?
 * would be good to add what cities are surrounding the lake to give better location to readers.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * The tone and balance is very well done
 * the information added is very neutral and very well put.
 * the information is very concise

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * plenty of source all seem reliable
 * source are not referenced in article however

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * organization is clean and broken up nice if I was a reader I could easily find the information I seek if looking up the reservoir

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * No images or media

Images and media evaluation
to be fair I do not know how to add pictures myself that is something I need to do and learn for mine as well!!

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Overall it was a nice article I did Learn about the reservoir
 * The information you added was just not deep enough
 * still some research is needed though I would like to know more of the history on the lake
 * I would also find it useful to know of any attractions to the lake. for instance: what can someone do there if they were to visit. Any parks? scenic views? camping?