User:Smartse/notes3

Creations

 * investment management firm this is not a 'POV' see e.g.
 * ecommerce - relies extremely heavily on company website
 * "real-estate investment advisory" heavily reliant on primary sources. Dubious notability.
 * "crowdfunding search engine" subsidiary of QuietStream Financial - same problems. Quote in lead fails V from source cited, but comes from the company's press release.
 * - Early life and education largely fails verification. source cited at time of writing
 * Lawfirm "Noted for its “substantial hedge-fund practice,” it has been described as “the leading law firm to the [hedge fund] industry.” in lead citing to a press release! Some other promo removed by SPECIFICO
 * "Therapies section" sourced to press release. Loeb invested in it (see below).
 * GA review somehow fails to notice citations to corporate website and press releases.
 * Passed GA despite there only being a single source that's anything close to BIO: . Needs AFDing.
 * Products section almost entirely sourced to corporate website.
 * Unsourced DOB and college info. Dubious notability.
 * - Hedgefund . Lead was extremely promotional until I removed it. Logo uploaded and updated in 2015 by a sock of Euclidthalis
 * son of former Indian Finance minister embroiled in corruption scandal. failed verification for degrees from Texas and Cambridge (I have checked) - info present in 2nd edit
 * French equity market
 * California pol
 * founder of If Americans Knew & author of Against Our Better Judgment: The Hidden History of How the U.S. Was Used to Create Israel
 * American academic
 * American academic
 * American academic
 * American/South African academic
 * American/South African academic

Edits

 * Top articles
 * two major rewrites: whole of 2013 rewrite e.g. adding PR fluff about philanthropy. Duly noted on the TP by User:SMcCandlish. 2016 rewrite highly reliant on philanthropyroundtable interview, the same that was heavily used in the 2013 edits. Copied straight off a CV. Note the implausibly short time between edits . More recently, clear change in meaning to done down criticism in an NYT article.
 * - top edited article. Note the involvement of Focusandlearn at that article.
 * also heavily edited.
 * founder and CE of Third Point Management above. What does "focused on event-driven, value-oriented investing" mean? Length Philanthropy section.
 * incorporating dislosed COI edits (see talk).
 * addition of WP:FAKE reference. Article started twice by Vipul editors.