User:Smaulsmall/Obstructed labour/Grang001 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Smaulsmall
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Obstructed labour

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes, for the most part!
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? They include information new and relevant information.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? It contains a good, detailed information. But it is not over detailed.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes, it is detailed and nice.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? To my knowledge, yes.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No, it does not appear so.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? I don't feel like it, no.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? The content in general does not.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? I believe so.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes
 * Are the sources current? Yes
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? For the most part, yes!
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes!!!

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? Yes!
 * Are images well-captioned? Yes they are.
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? I believe so, yes!
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? Yes they are, they fit under the topic they relate to.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.

Not a new article I don't think???


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes! More information has helped clearly define and describe the topic.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? I actually can't see edits from the peer... so perhaps I am doing this wrong? it says 0 edits made by my peer. The article in general however is done very well.
 * How can the content added be improved? The content can be improved includes shortening some unnecessary long sentences.