User:Smaxforbe/Ancient university/Tkmndd Peer Review

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Smaxforbe
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Smaxforbe/Ancient university
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ancient university

Evaluate the drafted changes
* I would reword the first sentence, "To understand 'Foundation' in the context....." Maybe try something like "The term "Foundation", in regards to ancient universities, refers to the official recognition and establishment of said institutions." or something of the like.

* In the last sentence in the bolded paragraph "Disregarding recieved certification....", is "foundation" a term or a noun? It's kind of ambigous. I would either capitalize it or add a "the" before it.

* Was the Papal Decree why he ordered the formation of schools, or was it in addition to the formation? I would change up the wording a bit, as it seems ambiguous. If the Papal Decree is what ordered the schools then maybe put something like "... the Papal Decree which ordered the formation...."

* What were the requirements that were needed for an ancient university to be recognized? I'd add a bit of information there.

* For the edit in the table for the "University of St Andrews" I would combine it into a single sentence instead of 2. Something like ".... established between 1410 and 1413, but officially recognized in 1413."

*** Good Job! Your paragraph is well thought out and I find it very interesting, it has good content. The only thing I can really see that needs a change is grammar ambiguity. Not everything is straightforward and easily understandable. It's a good lead in to the article though, nicely done.