User:Smaxine1/African-American Music Appreciation Month/Priscaumba Peer Review

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Smaxine1
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The article has added a history section which is very helpful in understanding the history behind how African American Music Appreciation Month came to be. There still needs to be more details added on the aspect of the history from back then till now. I think it would give clarity and better understanding to the readers. Secondly adding a timeline of work done before it was official African American Music Appreciation Month. For example, saying what important people and events led to ensure that this would become an important recognition.

I appreciate that they are linked to the different genres. However, they are simply listed rather than explained. I would say adding brief explanations and history is very important. This way readers can have an understanding of the genre and can explore more in the links.

I would add dates and timelines regarding the historical aspects. Simply stating slavery may not truly describe the depth of understanding of how this impacted the music. The grammar and spelling are fine. The work so far is very relevant and good.